New to this so please help me with contstructive criticism! :)

Sold mine Today for Maxs Hat

http://www.tf2outpost.com/trade/25791992#latest

EDIT Sellers BackPack http://backpack.tf/profiles/76561198115910495

http://imgur.com/SFVU21D

I offered The Unusual as well as minor sweets = 18.55 ref

Max: 26*0.925=24.05 --> 24 keys

Sellers at 24 Keys

http://www.tf2outpost.com/trade/25757172

http://www.tf2outpost.com/trade/25720912

Please tell me how to improve because i'm almost positive i didn't do this right! Thank you!

Thank you to coolrocks and mq..poe for help on making a better suggestion! I hope this passes!